Thursday, November 3, 2011

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I am also a big fan of Bethany Hamilton, I love how you were so detailed with all of your writing. You did leave out some words but altogether I loved your story. http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/beccah6/bethany-hamilton/#comment-10


I also re-did my room this summer, but I painted my room purple and I have two twin size beds in the shape of an “L”. Anyway I thought your story is very good and very detailed.http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/AshleyS51/my-new-room/


 Those are some really cool dreams, one time I had a dream that I was in that new Paranormal Activity 3 movie it was really weird…..http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/EmilyL66/random-dreams/


That sounds like a fun summer, I had a great summer to. I thought your story was very detailed and I loved it.http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/SamiK2/my-summer-6/

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